Recap Correct!
Dan has Matt Cassel becoming something else for the Patriots' offense. A solid look at his second great game in a row.
Unfortunately, it is littered with phrases that reveal Dan just trying too hard. There is a use of "the immortal" tag ("the immortal Billy Volek") that Dan has beaten to death. Dated song references ("The Patriots have been on a "Stayin' Alive Tour"; "Certainly the blossoming of Cassel is another brick in the wall of genius"). And just plain odd phrasing ("We're still seeing a lot of D and D"; "Early in the season, Cassel was unable to tap into the Moss Vault").
KISS, Dan. KISS.
Unfortunately, it is littered with phrases that reveal Dan just trying too hard. There is a use of "the immortal" tag ("the immortal Billy Volek") that Dan has beaten to death. Dated song references ("The Patriots have been on a "Stayin' Alive Tour"; "Certainly the blossoming of Cassel is another brick in the wall of genius"). And just plain odd phrasing ("We're still seeing a lot of D and D"; "Early in the season, Cassel was unable to tap into the Moss Vault").
KISS, Dan. KISS.

2 Comments:
Stayin' Alive - I'm certain he's not talking about the Globe's ability to continue as a going concern...
With layoffs and red ink at his newspaper, did Dan REALLY need to actually go to Miami? Or was it just a 'nice, warm place to go and as elder statesman at the Globe, he DESERVED to go?' Belt-tightening should mandate that only the beat writers go on these trips and the columnists stay home. Dan got NOTHING that he couldn't have gotten at home. Yeah, I DO feel in a position to tell them how to run their business because they're clearly screwing it up themselves while blaming it all on 'the Internet.'
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